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There layed a weeping girl on the grass,
sure the other steeping kids did harrast,


They made fun of her golden locks,her fluffly hair,
her pale skin,her mizzy flair,her darkened green orbs,
all of them said she was raised with whores,

Then came a kid,mighty and glee,
he ran up to the girl so she can see,
that she wasnt alone,
that he wasnt at all one that shone,



And as he reached a hand to her,
her heart glowed below the farthest seas.

As the two new friends ran to the sunset,
they left all the hurtful deeds..
©2008-2009 ~yael31
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This is a short poem i made. The title means,'Friends' If you didnt know. There was alot of misgrammar and misspelling,but still.. ^^;



Jacki ;)
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very nice it is clear where you got the idea from
but none the less very nice

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XD Thanks for the idea :hug: I owe you one ;)

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hehe welcoems

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Ah, could you explain what a steeping kid is? And what does harrest mean? Nice poem. :3

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I mean harrast.. ^^; When i say steep,i mean the Difficult kind.. XD Thank you :hug:

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But harrast isn't a word! DX Wait, do you mean harrassed?

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Yes :XD: But i guess i made another word! XD

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cute!!!!!!!!!!!

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